Post by Pink Shockprowl on Feb 16, 2011 19:50:09 GMT
HOW THE CRAP BAGS HAVE I MISSED ALL THIS?!?!
Andy, my goodness, utterly brilliant work. And, Sir, you do Prowl like a Prowl obsessive! I love your Prowl. Freakin' love it. The expression you're getting across, even in the face-plated Optimus! Blown away. Put me down for a printed copy!
I was the one who let you know, I was your sorry ever after, '84, '85. Give me new toys and I'll decide, but I'm really only after, '84, '85.
Post by Grand Moff Martin on Feb 19, 2011 9:02:22 GMT
Looks great! Beautiful solar storm effect.
From a flow point of view, I have the same comment as before with regard to making Prime's thought captions (on pages 1 and 8) look different from those of the third-person narrator. Oddly, I thought you had fixed page 1 but I can't see the difference now between the page 1 and 2 captions.
Little is known about this goblin beyond its dual role as an offensive weapon and teapot.
Depending on whether or not I finish the lines for Ch'p Chase tonight, I shall be starting on designing Action Master Dinobots.
Ooh, good thinking. the original artist in the 1992 annual was lazy and drew all of them except Grimlock normally. He could at least have done Snarl right, since he had an Action-Master toy.
I take it you'll just be designing Sludge and Swoop (since Slag could still transform in the story). Will you be giving them Power Plans labelling random parts of their bodies as having new and exciting functions?
Re: Fangry. I think Simon Furman forgot that Grimlock punched a hole straight through him in TF US #80 when he put him in this story as one of the surviving Decepticons. I think it would be a nice bit of continuity (and a reminder that TFs can sometimes take terrible damage without dying) if you have him walking around in ATAP with a big hole in him. And Crank-Case could be walking around with a flattened head and only one gun. (Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think Prime smashed his head in #80 but he was then seen running off without it.)
I don't think I will do power plans but if someone wants to use my designs and mock some up I am all in favour of that.
I don't know whether or not I will leave those transformers undamaged as Prowl's dialogue on page 7 clearly indicates the Decepticons had a tussle with the Autobots after the fight on Klo. But I may do them as having somewhat makeshift repairs having been attempted.