Ah - would the continuity error be that the Optimus Prime in the framing sequence (which takes place after he regains the ability to transform) should not look like the Action-Master who speaks to Prowl? I never thought of that.
Now don't kill me, but because I want the text to look as professional as the artwork, I must point out that there are three instances of IT'S on page 10 that should read ITS because they are possessives and not short for IT IS. (Its molten mouth, its muscled immensity, its tank like structure.)
Post by Grand Moff Martin on May 18, 2012 4:46:09 GMT
Magnificent work, Andy. You are a hero of our time.
Lovely use of our old friend the sound effect. I also like the techno-organic look of the trees.
Two instances of the word "it's" where the apostrophe needs removing, one at the start of panel 4, the other at the start of the second box in panel 5. (There are three correctly spelt instances of "its" in those two panels already, mind.)