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Post by grahamthomson on Nov 18, 2008 9:19:54 GMT
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Post by legios on Nov 18, 2008 21:22:40 GMT
Charles, you should take yourself a bow. It is a nice simple idea, well suited to the mosaic format. Not only that but it feels appropriate in terms of the characters involved, and quite true to the tone of the "Beast Wars" TV show. Nicely done, and my congratulations to the artists as well - I'm a big fan of black-and-white comics anyway and I think some of those panels work rather well.
Karl
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Nov 18, 2008 22:06:49 GMT
Great work Charles, I'm not as keen as Karl with the art, but it's a great done in one story.
Andy
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Post by charlesrocketboy on Nov 21, 2008 1:26:02 GMT
Only just noticed it was up - thanks all!  This is actually the first one I wrote, it's just taken this long to turn up. Originally intended to come up with more dialogue (I wrote the panel descriptions first) but then realised it'd be more effective with sparse dialogue. I'd have done none at all, but thought it'd clearer for the cheap seats with some in. Originally going to be coloured too, but the colourist didn't have much free time so I thought "sod it, black-and-white works fine" and sent. Now I read on the IDW board that it's opened the gates for things! Now I just need to get an artist for the RID Predacon Trio Mosaic... |
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Post by grahamthomson on Nov 21, 2008 8:21:31 GMT
It's actually one of the very Mosaics that manages to tell a story in one page. Excellent stuff, Charles!
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Post by charlesrocketboy on Nov 21, 2008 10:49:40 GMT
It's actually one of the very Mosaics that manages to tell a story in one page. Yeah, I have noticed a number of Mosaics seem to be acting as teasers to other stories (that we will probably not see) rather than a complete tale. Bit weird, really. |
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Nov 21, 2008 11:18:24 GMT
Probably used by the writers as gateway pieces to their own fanfic. Not necessarily a bad thing but kind of missing the entire point of the Mosaic project.
Andy
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Post by Dark Stranger on Nov 21, 2008 12:48:21 GMT
Quite liked that, well done!
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Post by chrisl on Dec 3, 2008 14:12:43 GMT
Possibly the best mosaic storywise I've seen. Shame the art guy rushed it as it's a GREAT idea |
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Post by charlesrocketboy on Dec 3, 2008 18:58:11 GMT
Thanks. (Though "rush it"? Ha, that thing took AGES to come out!) |
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