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Post by charlesrocketboy on Oct 1, 2008 22:24:40 GMT
So. We all say that AHM 1-3 doesn't include enough material for three issues. But is that true? Can it really be condensed? The answer is, YES! Not only that, but there's room for multiple new scenes! And then I just added, removed, tweaked and re-dialogued bits for the hell of it. www.geocities.com/charlesrocketboy/tfAHM_1script.doc |
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Oct 2, 2008 20:45:05 GMT
Now that would have been a much better first issue.
Andy
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Post by charlesrocketboy on Nov 14, 2008 1:34:24 GMT
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Post by Shockprowl on Nov 14, 2008 23:39:24 GMT
Absolutely mint, old boy! Good effort!
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Post by charlesrocketboy on Jan 11, 2009 23:29:06 GMT
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 15, 2009 12:17:39 GMT
A much better read than the actual comic!
Andy
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Post by charlesrocketboy on Jan 15, 2009 15:07:03 GMT
Be embarrassing if it was only as good as the real thing!
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 15, 2009 19:53:10 GMT
It'd be a challenge to do something that bad.
Andy
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Post by charlesrocketboy on Jan 15, 2009 20:02:08 GMT
I don't think I'm up for such a challenge.  |
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 15, 2009 20:04:21 GMT
I'd need to be really drunk first - next time Turn and burn are assembled we will do the ritual TRIAL OF A TIME LORD + VODKA and then we will write down or record an awesome transformers tale that will put AHM to shame!
Andy
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Post by The Doctor on Jan 15, 2009 20:12:23 GMT
Damn right.
You will need to get a copy then. Mine is somewhere in storage.
-Ralph
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 15, 2009 20:13:07 GMT
I will sort out a copy soon enough and some Thundergod and we are ready to rock!
Andy
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Post by The Doctor on Jan 15, 2009 20:18:11 GMT
It has been too long since the Thundergod.
Come to think of it, AHM would be better if Thor was in it.
-Ralph
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 15, 2009 20:29:48 GMT
What couldn't be improved by the Son of Odin?!
Andy
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Post by charlesrocketboy on Mar 6, 2009 18:32:07 GMT
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Post by blueshift on Mar 7, 2009 19:53:44 GMT
That is bloody amazing. I'd cut the comic sans though!
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Post by charlesrocketboy on Mar 7, 2009 20:48:18 GMT
Though I'm worried that, having cut out Sunstreaker and Kup, the next few issues may have Sunstreaker and Kup as far too central to the plot... |
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Post by blueshift on Mar 7, 2009 21:33:10 GMT
I'm more worried that you seem to be steaming ahead of the actual issues, thus leaving you with less to write about
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Post by charlesrocketboy on Apr 1, 2009 0:40:36 GMT
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Post by The Doctor on Apr 1, 2009 19:41:03 GMT
I haven't got round to reading these yet. I'm waiting until you get to #6 so I can read it in one go and pretend it's an alternate VOL 1 TPB!
-Ralph
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Post by charlesrocketboy on Apr 1, 2009 21:36:26 GMT
But then you don't get to imagine alternate variant covers and alternate shipping delays!
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Post by The Doctor on Apr 2, 2009 20:01:33 GMT
It's the price I must pay.
-Ralph
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