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Post by Benn on Jul 19, 2022 7:24:34 GMT
 Taking a leaf out of Mr. Turnbull's book, I'm kinda sorta adapting a Marvel UK Annual story to comic form. Right now it's it's a strictly casual affair, I'll see how well I progress. <edit> at least I will when I can work out how to make the link work! |
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Post by Philip Ayres on Jul 19, 2022 8:14:50 GMT
sorted, just paste the flickr bb code link
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Post by Benn on Jul 19, 2022 8:18:28 GMT
You know, I'm sure I tried that... Glad it's working now though, thanks!
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Post by tomwe on Jul 19, 2022 8:59:43 GMT
Loving the trailing headlight effects. Great work!
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Post by Benn on Jul 19, 2022 9:05:57 GMT
Thanks! Determined to show my Akira influences somehow!
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Post by Benn on Jul 20, 2022 12:29:40 GMT
Next page requires words though, and I'm not sure how to do that. Hmm.
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Post by Benn on Jul 23, 2022 10:13:35 GMT
 Second page sans text, which I am still trying to work out the best way to do. |
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Post by Pinwig on Jul 23, 2022 10:44:56 GMT
I would go with using words.
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Post by Benn on Jul 23, 2022 11:14:59 GMT
Not binary? Okay, I'll bear that in mind.
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Post by Benn on Jul 25, 2022 21:03:39 GMT
 My first ever shaky attempts at lettering. Procreate isn't built for this, but it'll do for now. |
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Post by Pinwig on Jul 25, 2022 21:09:41 GMT
Looks bloody great, Benn.
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Post by Benn on Jul 25, 2022 21:15:32 GMT
Thanks!
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Post by tomwe on Jul 26, 2022 8:47:24 GMT
fab!
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Post by Benn on Jul 26, 2022 15:57:37 GMT
 Bit of a placeholder page three, until I can tidy up/change the logo and maybe work out a better way of doing the hand lettering. |
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Post by chrisl on Aug 6, 2022 7:50:48 GMT
This is amazing! Love the art and how you’re telling this story visually.
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Post by Benn on Aug 6, 2022 18:03:57 GMT
Okay people, robot modes are on the horizon so I'm wondering what people want to see more, Marvel 100%, Marvel inspired, or my own take on them?
My intent was my own take on the Marvel designs, but the way I've used realistic vehicles makes me wonder whether I should go the IDW route and reinterpret them more completely.
Thoughts?
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Aug 6, 2022 19:58:40 GMT
Go with whatever you think is going to be the most fun to draw.
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Post by Pinwig on Aug 6, 2022 20:34:03 GMT
Absolutely the right answer :)
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Post by Benn on Aug 6, 2022 21:56:50 GMT
Thanks guys!
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Post by The Doctor on Aug 16, 2022 10:28:17 GMT
Yay!
-Ralph
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Post by Benn on Aug 18, 2022 18:55:21 GMT
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Post by Benn on Aug 18, 2022 18:56:42 GMT
This page is going to need some reworking later, but I needed to get it out of my system and cracking on.
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Post by Benn on Aug 21, 2022 13:31:23 GMT
 In which our hero cheats at mountain climbing. |
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Post by Benn on Aug 21, 2022 15:13:56 GMT
I need to move that last speech bubble. It's obscuring too much of the fifth panel.
Page six is a nice cliffhanger though, so if I can get that out in the next week or so, I can stop there happily while I spend September travelling.
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Post by Benn on Aug 22, 2022 20:24:32 GMT
Page six should be good to go tomorrow. Amazing how quick I can work when my head actually focusses for once.
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Post by Benn on Aug 23, 2022 10:18:42 GMT
Updated page 5 tweak.
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Post by Benn on Aug 23, 2022 11:16:30 GMT
 And we'll end things there for now, as I work on scripting the ambush flashback. |
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Post by Pinwig on Aug 23, 2022 11:52:25 GMT
Benn, this is brilliant stuff!
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Post by Benn on Aug 23, 2022 12:50:36 GMT
Thanks!
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Post by chrisl on Aug 30, 2022 15:47:53 GMT
The sheer terror you've managed to convey purely in how you've drawn that optic in the last panel is phenomenal storytelling!
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