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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 16, 2008 12:15:16 GMT
Just a little random page of sequentials I started on during the week.  Andy |
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Post by Gav on Jan 16, 2008 13:27:23 GMT
That dude just loves being pan bread. Nice work so far!  |
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 16, 2008 13:28:21 GMT
He does indeed. His tomb should have a revolving door for easy access.
Andy
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Post by Dark Stranger on Jan 16, 2008 14:19:35 GMT
That's quite brutal looking actually. Now he knows how Time Wars Galvatron felt.
Is that G1 Prime? I can see something like a wing on that second frame?
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 16, 2008 14:23:17 GMT
It's Action Master Prime. As for the wing, it's not actually a wing and the next page shows you exactly what it is.
For some reason I have something of a penchant for doing TF's with half their faces blown off - probably because of Time Wars Galvatron!
Andy
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Post by Gav on Jan 16, 2008 15:34:04 GMT
Oh man I'm totally going to do a TF with half his face blown off!
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 16, 2008 15:36:52 GMT
It's a slippery road to addiction Gav! Trust me!
Andy
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Post by Gav on Jan 16, 2008 15:40:45 GMT
Wheelie, with half his face blown off!
Imagine the MAJESTY OF IT!
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 16, 2008 16:30:06 GMT
Careful now. You'll make Ralph cry.
Andy
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 16, 2008 20:10:50 GMT
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Post by legios on Jan 16, 2008 21:57:13 GMT
Just had a chance to have a look at these. I do like the Prime with his head half-shattered - it's quite a nice image, and you've picked quite a good angle on it - making it central to the image without making it look like you are trying to make it look central. If you see what I mean.
Karl
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 16, 2008 22:01:41 GMT
Thanks Karl. I didn't have much of an idea of what I was doing when I started the page and then it slowly came to me. I'm especially happy with how it fits into the next page. Though for pacing I will probably add a page in before that first one to make it flow better.
Glad you liked it.
Andy
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Post by Grand Moff Muffin on Jan 17, 2008 7:45:04 GMT
Ah! So it was all a dream, and Hot Rod is horrified that Prime is crucified not on a Christ-like cross but as if he was beginning to dance "YMCA".  Martin |
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Post by grahamthomson on Jan 17, 2008 8:43:32 GMT
Very nice there Andy. I particularly like the depiction of Kup in the last panel and Rodimus Prime in panel 2 on the second page. Great stuff.
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Post by Dark Stranger on Jan 17, 2008 9:40:31 GMT
That looks great. Is this a work in progress then Andy, or just a muckabout?
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 17, 2008 10:51:14 GMT
Ah! So it was all a dream, and Hot Rod is horrified that Prime is crucified not on a Christ-like cross but as if he was beginning to dance "YMCA". Martin Who knows what the third page will bring! Andy |
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 17, 2008 10:53:19 GMT
Very nice there Andy. I particularly like the depiction of Kup in the last panel and Rodimus Prime in panel 2 on the second page. Great stuff. Thanks. That pic of Hot Rod was an absolute bitch to do, it took something like three attempts to get right. Later today I'll upload my rough pencil version of the page so you can see how it started. I'm quite chuffed with the Kup pic as well. I'm now scared to ink it in case I arse it up! Andy |
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 17, 2008 10:54:34 GMT
That looks great. Is this a work in progress then Andy, or just a muckabout? Cheers. It started as a muckabout but a story idea came to me as I was doing it. Still not entirely clear on where it's going but I kind of know what I want to do. Andy |
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Post by The Doctor on Jan 18, 2008 20:08:02 GMT
Another terrible Turnbull effort. When will that man learn to draw?
I kid, I kid.
Some good sequential there.
-Ralph
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 18, 2008 22:03:57 GMT
Heh! Thanks.
Andy
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Post by Shockprowl on Jan 20, 2008 16:12:34 GMT
Wheelie, with half his face blown off! Imagine the MAJESTY OF IT! Yes! Do it! Do it! Nice work And. |
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Post by KoshNaranek on Jan 23, 2008 18:41:22 GMT
Love the first page, but I think the second page is even better. Some really nice detail in there. I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going, and knowing that it isin't all predetermined makes it even more interesting.
- Tony
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Post by grahamthomson on Jan 23, 2008 20:24:20 GMT
[Waits for page three...]
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 23, 2008 22:03:44 GMT
Love the first page, but I think the second page is even better. Some really nice detail in there. I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going, and knowing that it isin't all predetermined makes it even more interesting. - Tony The first page was done on a4 (actual size) which means it does suffer a little bit. I did the second page a4 as well but it wasn't looking as good so I went to A3 and it definitely helped. Thanks for the kind words. I have a vague idea in my head where to take the story but for the actual specifics I'll just see what happens. Although Ralph (despite claiming he was done with fanfic) emailed me to suggest a rather unique direction of telling the story. Andy |
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 23, 2008 22:04:10 GMT
[Waits for page three...] Well you'll just have to wait a few days longer I've had a busy week and I have something else that needs to be finished off first! Andy |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 26, 2008 19:27:51 GMT
You really should post some of your sketches to IDW. I think they would be proud of them.
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Post by Nigel on Jan 28, 2008 11:33:13 GMT
"Welease Wavage."
"Welease Wunabout."
"Welease Wodimus."
"Actually, we do have a Rodimus."
"I'm Prime."
"I'm Prime!"
"No, I'm Prime!"
Jolly nice Kup, there.
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 28, 2008 11:55:33 GMT
Thanks guys.
Glad you liked Kup I was very chuffed with the way he came out. I was originally also going to have Swoop in the panel but I thought it made it too cramped.
Andy
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Post by The Doctor on Feb 2, 2008 16:25:21 GMT
Prime lives!  -Ralph |
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Post by Grand Moff Muffin on Feb 2, 2008 16:57:33 GMT
Excellent! I like the guilty/nervous sideways eyeballs as he wastes a poor Decepticon chump off-screen. I also like the windscreen wipers on the truck windows, which make it look like the truck face is clenching its eyes tight shut as he pulls the trigger.
Whatever it lacks, your Prime has personality.
Martin
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