Gav
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Post by Gav on Jan 20, 2008 16:17:29 GMT
Did this quickly this morning:  Still has a lot to do...but it's looking alright. |
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Hero
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Post by Hero on Jan 20, 2008 17:04:47 GMT
It RULES!!!!!!!
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Post by The Doctor on Jan 20, 2008 17:31:30 GMT
Passes the sequential art test of 'I can work out roughly what is going on without dialogue'.
-Ralph
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Post by legios on Jan 20, 2008 18:01:55 GMT
Indeed, it is good stuff. Very much in the animated aesthetic, but as Ralph says it works in terms of sequential art (the story flow of which should be clear without dialogue or captions).
(Although it may just be my brain that puts "Nope, you can't park that there." into the mouth of the detective in panel three.)
Karl
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Gav
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Post by Gav on Jan 20, 2008 19:44:51 GMT
Did some quick colours based on the rough  |
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Post by Gav on Jan 20, 2008 21:38:00 GMT
As you can see, I'm no letterer, or writer.  |
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 20, 2008 22:24:16 GMT
Niiiiice!!!!!
Andy
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Post by grahamthomson on Jan 22, 2008 13:55:07 GMT
That is awesome, Gav!
Once Animated airs in the UK, you want to get an 11 page story submitted to Titan so they can use your talents to publish a tie-in comic series.
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Post by Cullen on Jan 22, 2008 14:37:51 GMT
Wow that is really good stuff Gav!
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Gav
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Post by Gav on Jan 22, 2008 14:43:49 GMT
Looking back at it, i need to do a lot to it. There's some stuff that's really not where it should be. But thanks everyone!
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Post by grahamthomson on Jan 22, 2008 17:39:16 GMT
Okay, now the Adbot is scaring me!!!! # Gay Fan Fiction Find the love of your life today. Register for free with gay-PARSHIP. www.gay-PARSHIP.co.ukEeek! I was just going to post and mention that if any TF style could grant me the patience to draw something then it would be Animated. |
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Post by legios on Jan 22, 2008 20:53:30 GMT
Gav, that is really good there. I'm deeply impressed by your talent - as I am by everyone who can draw on that level. The colours are also fantastic. And don't be to harsh on yourself as a writer - I thought that your Captain Fanzone was pretty good, I thought you'd captured the way he speaks nicely. And your Prime, whilst crankier than we've seen him most of the time reads credibly like Animated Prime might sound if he were ticked off.
All round good work.
Karl
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Gav
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Post by Gav on Jan 23, 2008 14:40:28 GMT
Thanks Karl, i appreciate it. I'm going to do another page this week if i can. Perhaps involving a certain arachnid-bot.
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KoshNaranek
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Post by KoshNaranek on Jan 23, 2008 18:33:31 GMT
That looks great Gav! Perfect clean lines that suit the animated style to a tee. I agree with Karl that you should definitely submit some work to Titan and even IDW. As for the lettering, I actually think that the way you've done it suits the art and colouring and shouldn't be changed.
- Tony
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