Gav
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Post by Gav on Mar 12, 2008 18:49:56 GMT
Thought I'd give another shot at the sequentials:  Still a few things to fix but it's looking alright so far methinks. |
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Mar 13, 2008 11:55:00 GMT
A mighty effort that much is true,
But I would make a suggestion or two,
The clouds you have placed on either side of the page,
Have lines far too straight and this makes me rage, (not really but I am rhyming)
They distort the view of the main image in particular it's perspective
This subtle incongruity leaves me dejected.
Andy
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