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Post by blueshift on Jan 18, 2010 7:52:59 GMT
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Post by Grand Moff Muffin on Jan 18, 2010 16:44:38 GMT
Looks terrific, but I'm not certain I understand it either. It reads as if it refers to some story I haven't read to do with monkeys and their gods - as if it's a nod/homage to some other work.
It could be that it _doesn't_ refer to anything outside itself, in which case it _does_ make sense as a standalone, but seems a bit random.
But, yeah, looks terrific!
Martin
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Post by charlesrocketboy on Jan 19, 2010 2:04:56 GMT
People didn't get the plot? It's Dreadwind going mental with guilt and paranoia after killing Apeface , it's not complicated or anything. It's bloody great though! |
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Post by blueshift on Jan 19, 2010 9:29:24 GMT
It could be that it _doesn't_ refer to anything outside itself, in which case it _does_ make sense as a standalone, but seems a bit random. It doesn't refer to anything outside itself, it is just a story about Dreadwind being paranoid - OR IS HE? I like to hint at stuff that happens before/after stories, but I think that makes people have the automatic reaction of 'OH GOD IT IS IN SOME SORT OF CONTINUITY, IT IS TOO COMPLEX' It was a very old script though, and could have been tightened up, but the art had already been drawn. Such is life! (The last panel drawing asked for Dreadwind looking all scared, he looks to be shouting though in the final frame! No-one's commented on that though, so its all good!) |
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Post by Kingoji on Jan 19, 2010 9:55:52 GMT
^ You could view it that Dreadwind is screaming. That way, when coupled with the dialogue about how the monkeys scream and scream it makes it clear that the monkeys are in his head. I like it, I think it's good.   |
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Post by grahamthomson on Mar 16, 2010 10:13:32 GMT
I never got around to commenting on this. Enjoyed it! Though I think the zeitgeist description for it is that it's "nigh impenetrable". |
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