[Photo-Comic] I-Planetary V.2 Chapter 2

[dyrl]

Sorry it took so long and sorry there's no cover! but here it is - chapter 2:












dyrl

[Hero]

These photo-comics are awesome dude. Keep up the good work.

===KEN

[dyrl]

Sank yu, sank yu

The next story will be a bit longer (although it originally appeared as 4 chapters, 4 pages each chapter), and is an "Intermezzo."

I wrote it and tried to give it a more serious tone than what we've seen so far... I'm curious whether people will enjoy it!

Stay tuned...

dyrl

[legios]

Something about the absurdity of these first few has brought me a chuckle. I love Megatron's advert campaign - it just seems so bizarre. And of course Galvatron's narcolepsy is pretty true to the Beast Wars 2nd series.

Karl

[dyrl]

"Absurd" is mildly putting it The only portion of the story I don't find absurd concern Autobot Earth base. As I noted before, the fellow who plays Prowl has a sound understanding of the character - sound enough to make the story run smoothly. Diddo for the chap who plays Galvatron (G1). As for BW Galvatron's narcolepsy... well - that was my doing I just had to "shut down" the "invisibility module" plot thread that the fellow who plays Magmatron set into motion - it called for BW Galvatron and Hardhead to use the "invisibility module" to "turn invisible like Mirage" and make off with Grapple... (Although I guess if they'd succeeded it would have been amusing - Grapple levitating in mid-air yelling "hoi! help me! I'm being bot-napped!" as the two "invisible" Beast Warriors ferried off with him)...

Anyways - I guess it is amusing; although sometimes it gets depressing when you make an effort to set up interesting plot contexts for people and they go insane on you... notice that in the prologue, the VF-1J shoots down Skywarp, the humans are clearly hunting for Starscream - I worked hard to give the kid playing Starscream a really nice "entrance"...and his big idea was to rob a gas station ...sigh...

In this episode - the most absurd portion concerns Bumblebee. Of course, you won't find out untill a few chapters down the line why he's been arrested - but trust me - when you do... it's worse that "bonkers" Primal... (which, by the by, gets set straight next episode!)

Anyways - happy you're amused and chuckling That's something

dyrl

[Grand Moff Muffin]

Ho ho! That ending scene where one of the protagonists randomly falls asleep in mid-sentence was genius.

How brilliant would it be if that sort of thing happened in 'real' TF stories?

"Talk is cheap, slime! Show me something or- yawn! Zzzzzz..."

"One shall stand, one shall- yawn! Zzzzzz..."

"Sam! Put the Allspark in my ch- yawn! Zzzzzz..."

Martin