Post by Deleted on Sept 7, 2009 19:50:11 GMT
This is my attempt at a parody Transformers story. It is also my very first attempt at fanfiction so don't be surprised if it doesn't live up to the standards of other bits of fanfiction here. Comments, praise or general sarcasm can be posted after the story!
1. A New Planet
On a faraway planet deep in outer space a war is raging. It is a war of robots capable of transforming into specialist equipment and vehicles. On one side are the Autobots - the peaceful inhabitants of the planet Cybertron who have lived there for many thousands of years without war or hostility. On the other side are the Decepticons - a ruthless team of robots whose lust for power and glory have forced the pacifist Autobots into war. The war has now been going on for some time. Some of Cybertron's many inhabitants say it has been raging for over five thousand years but other, less intelligent beings claim that it only started the other day!
The Autobots are lead by Optimus Prime - a bold and fearless leader while the Decepticons are lead by the maniacal Megatron. This story however, doesn't focus on their war on Cybertron but rather another, completely different war on the other side of the planet between another, much smaller, team of Autobots and Decepticons.
The Autobots in this war are lead by their heroic leader Beebor - a statuesque and brave fighter noted for his sombre black and white colour scheme. It was Beebor who assembled this small team of Autobots at the start of the war and, being head of the little known Autobot Protection Agency he lead his troops into battle against the Decepticons lead by the maniacal Treads - a tall and bulky fighter whose green metal body towers above Beebor. Believing that size isn't important Beebor refused to surrender and took the fight against Treads. Backing up Beebor were his fellow assistants in the Autobot Protection Agency. Stacker - a medium-sized yellow robot and Gullwing - a silver coloured robot roughly the same size as Beebor. Completing the team were volunteers who were willing to risk their lives for the good of their home planet. These were the small but brave yellow robot Robin, bulky green and brown robot Rustbucket, small white robot Goldtop, mini robot Titch who was renowned for his metallic blue colour scheme, Motown - the oldest robot of the group who offers advice to the younger members of the team but refuses to take advice on upgrading his worn out body and lastly Chocky - a pink and white robot whose colour brings more chuckles from the opposition than attacks.
The Decepticons in contrast are seemingly better prepared for war. Consisting of Treads and his equally statuesque generals the are Congestion and Wurzel - two orange coloured brothers who always fight together, the red coloured Busfare and bulky brown robot Roadblock. Unfortunately though, like the Autobots there are a few straddlers that came along for the ride.Treads has very little time for mini robotos Runaround, Peddle and Hairdryer who are coloured blue, silver and red respectably. They may be good at infiltrating places unnoticed but they are also professionals when it comes to getting under the feet of the larger robots.
Our story starts at a turning point in the war on Cybertron. The Autobots, after seeing their planet being slowly destroyed by war decide to leave the planet looking for a new one in the hope that the Decepticons would follow them and leave Cybertron in peace. They secretly build a starship specially designed for long-distance space travel and depart the planet they had lived on since their creation. At first, the Decepticon didn't follow but when they discovered that Cybertron wasn't any fun anymore without Beebor and his team they unearthed their craft they had used to travel to other planets in the past and went off in search of them.
On the Autobots starcruiser Beebor reflected upon his times on Cybertron and hoped that one day he would return there. Suddenly, there was a large thud against their ship which made it shudder violently.
'We've hit an asteroid' exclaimed Robin in shock 'I told you to watch where you were driving this crate Stacker but you wouldn't listen would you?'
Stacker looked in Robin's direction from where he was sitting at the front of the control room.
'It's no asteroid' replied Stacker 'at a guess I'd say the Decepticons are trying to run us off the road!'
'Run us off the road?' laughed Robin sarcastically 'how can they run us off the road? We're in bloody space not the Cybertron main highway!'
'There might be a road' defended Gullwing 'its just that this area is so black we can't see one!' Robin gave up before Beebor started in on the conversation and walked to the back of the control room. Suddenly though, he was hit over the head and knocked unconscious by a tall, lurking figure.
'Treads!' gasped Beebor in shock 'how did you get in here?'
'Well, I won an all access pass to this ship in a cereal packet competition last month!' the Decepticon leader said sarcastically 'how do you think I bloody got in here - I linked a boarding chute to your ship, I blasted a hole in it and entered. Now, if you don't mind I'm commandeering this vessel and taking you lot all prisoner.'
A fight started but very soon the ship began to vibrate and wobble. Treads looked towards the control panel and saw Stacker smashing up the panel with his fists.
'What are doing you stupid Autobot?' shouted Treads.
Stacker smiled as he walked away from the panel amid flying sparks and smoke billowing out from some of the computer displays.
'I've set a course for the nearest planet in a straight line from our current position and smashed the controls so that you can't change its course. If we crash into something, say a volcano for instance on this planet then everybody on board this ship will be destroyed - including you!'
'You're a stupid bucket of bolts for doing that because you've even comdemned your own leader to death!' Treads fumed.
'Us Autobots have no fear in dying' retaliated Beebor 'we're only robots after all. If we die we'll become heroes on Cybertron and they might make some toys of us as a tribute to our heroism in destroying your team of Decepticons.'
Treads then lunged at Beebor as the other Decepticons went for the remaining Autobots. The fighting lasted many space cycles and only ended when the ship crash-landed on a distant planet and knocked all of its passengers offline.
To Be Continued...
TRANSFORMERS: ALTERNATIVES
THE FLIP SIDE OF THE TRANSFORMERS
1. A New Planet
On a faraway planet deep in outer space a war is raging. It is a war of robots capable of transforming into specialist equipment and vehicles. On one side are the Autobots - the peaceful inhabitants of the planet Cybertron who have lived there for many thousands of years without war or hostility. On the other side are the Decepticons - a ruthless team of robots whose lust for power and glory have forced the pacifist Autobots into war. The war has now been going on for some time. Some of Cybertron's many inhabitants say it has been raging for over five thousand years but other, less intelligent beings claim that it only started the other day!
The Autobots are lead by Optimus Prime - a bold and fearless leader while the Decepticons are lead by the maniacal Megatron. This story however, doesn't focus on their war on Cybertron but rather another, completely different war on the other side of the planet between another, much smaller, team of Autobots and Decepticons.
The Autobots in this war are lead by their heroic leader Beebor - a statuesque and brave fighter noted for his sombre black and white colour scheme. It was Beebor who assembled this small team of Autobots at the start of the war and, being head of the little known Autobot Protection Agency he lead his troops into battle against the Decepticons lead by the maniacal Treads - a tall and bulky fighter whose green metal body towers above Beebor. Believing that size isn't important Beebor refused to surrender and took the fight against Treads. Backing up Beebor were his fellow assistants in the Autobot Protection Agency. Stacker - a medium-sized yellow robot and Gullwing - a silver coloured robot roughly the same size as Beebor. Completing the team were volunteers who were willing to risk their lives for the good of their home planet. These were the small but brave yellow robot Robin, bulky green and brown robot Rustbucket, small white robot Goldtop, mini robot Titch who was renowned for his metallic blue colour scheme, Motown - the oldest robot of the group who offers advice to the younger members of the team but refuses to take advice on upgrading his worn out body and lastly Chocky - a pink and white robot whose colour brings more chuckles from the opposition than attacks.
The Decepticons in contrast are seemingly better prepared for war. Consisting of Treads and his equally statuesque generals the are Congestion and Wurzel - two orange coloured brothers who always fight together, the red coloured Busfare and bulky brown robot Roadblock. Unfortunately though, like the Autobots there are a few straddlers that came along for the ride.Treads has very little time for mini robotos Runaround, Peddle and Hairdryer who are coloured blue, silver and red respectably. They may be good at infiltrating places unnoticed but they are also professionals when it comes to getting under the feet of the larger robots.
Our story starts at a turning point in the war on Cybertron. The Autobots, after seeing their planet being slowly destroyed by war decide to leave the planet looking for a new one in the hope that the Decepticons would follow them and leave Cybertron in peace. They secretly build a starship specially designed for long-distance space travel and depart the planet they had lived on since their creation. At first, the Decepticon didn't follow but when they discovered that Cybertron wasn't any fun anymore without Beebor and his team they unearthed their craft they had used to travel to other planets in the past and went off in search of them.
On the Autobots starcruiser Beebor reflected upon his times on Cybertron and hoped that one day he would return there. Suddenly, there was a large thud against their ship which made it shudder violently.
'We've hit an asteroid' exclaimed Robin in shock 'I told you to watch where you were driving this crate Stacker but you wouldn't listen would you?'
Stacker looked in Robin's direction from where he was sitting at the front of the control room.
'It's no asteroid' replied Stacker 'at a guess I'd say the Decepticons are trying to run us off the road!'
'Run us off the road?' laughed Robin sarcastically 'how can they run us off the road? We're in bloody space not the Cybertron main highway!'
'There might be a road' defended Gullwing 'its just that this area is so black we can't see one!' Robin gave up before Beebor started in on the conversation and walked to the back of the control room. Suddenly though, he was hit over the head and knocked unconscious by a tall, lurking figure.
'Treads!' gasped Beebor in shock 'how did you get in here?'
'Well, I won an all access pass to this ship in a cereal packet competition last month!' the Decepticon leader said sarcastically 'how do you think I bloody got in here - I linked a boarding chute to your ship, I blasted a hole in it and entered. Now, if you don't mind I'm commandeering this vessel and taking you lot all prisoner.'
A fight started but very soon the ship began to vibrate and wobble. Treads looked towards the control panel and saw Stacker smashing up the panel with his fists.
'What are doing you stupid Autobot?' shouted Treads.
Stacker smiled as he walked away from the panel amid flying sparks and smoke billowing out from some of the computer displays.
'I've set a course for the nearest planet in a straight line from our current position and smashed the controls so that you can't change its course. If we crash into something, say a volcano for instance on this planet then everybody on board this ship will be destroyed - including you!'
'You're a stupid bucket of bolts for doing that because you've even comdemned your own leader to death!' Treads fumed.
'Us Autobots have no fear in dying' retaliated Beebor 'we're only robots after all. If we die we'll become heroes on Cybertron and they might make some toys of us as a tribute to our heroism in destroying your team of Decepticons.'
Treads then lunged at Beebor as the other Decepticons went for the remaining Autobots. The fighting lasted many space cycles and only ended when the ship crash-landed on a distant planet and knocked all of its passengers offline.
To Be Continued...