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Post by Grand Moff Muffin on Feb 1, 2009 13:35:23 GMT
I've done one. It's in the Files section of the TMUK group in Word document format.
Feel free to PDF and JPEG it if you like!
Martin
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Feb 1, 2009 18:30:36 GMT
Thanks Martin, I've updated the site with the jpeg and pdf versions as well as the original word version.
A splendid tale and quite a nice riff on the Matrix, interesting to see someone touch on why Prime chose Magnus over Hot Rod especially given that he knows Rodimus is his successor.
Andy
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Post by Grand Moff Muffin on Feb 1, 2009 18:51:32 GMT
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Post by grahamthomson on Feb 2, 2009 13:00:55 GMT
If these Broadsides mean more fiction from Martin, then I am all for the format!
Martin wins 10 karma points for telling such a good story in such a short space.
(I have also bestowed the same for Karl and Charles for their Broadsides as well!)
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Post by legios on Feb 2, 2009 21:50:35 GMT
A nice little morsel of story there Martin. Small, compact and ideally suited to the format. Cuts nicely to the heart of some of the inexplicable things regarding the Matrix and makes sense of them rather well. It is a mark of a well constructed story when you arrive at the final scene and find yourself nodding at the logic of it, and feeling that the new information that you have is the logical extension of what you have learnt in the story. As ever, you have turned in a fantastic little story there Martin, and one that exploits the single page format very, very well.
Karl
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Post by Dark Stranger on Feb 3, 2009 19:13:15 GMT
That was a fantastic story.
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Post by Grand Moff Muffin on Feb 3, 2009 19:43:49 GMT
Thanks, guys.
All the other Broadsides RULE too.
Martin
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Post by The Doctor on Feb 22, 2009 16:00:58 GMT
I'm a bit thick. Where is the jpeg of this?
-Ralph
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Post by Grand Moff Muffin on Feb 22, 2009 16:42:42 GMT
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Post by The Doctor on Feb 22, 2009 20:36:51 GMT
Is there any way to make the jpeg bigger? It's a bit titchy on screen.
-Ralph
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Feb 22, 2009 20:45:24 GMT
Yes there is. I shall do that tomorrow for I am running on 90 mins sleep from last night and can't really concentrate on owt right now.
Andy
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Post by Rich on May 27, 2009 11:17:22 GMT
Nice story, Martin. As the others said, you mange to cram an unbelievable amount into such a short space to craft a very fine, distinctly tmuk tale - your command of continuity is totally undiminished I see.
I'm not sure about all the bathing that goes on though!
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