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Post by legios on Nov 21, 2011 13:04:49 GMT
Some very nice stuff there indeed Andy.
Karl
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Nov 21, 2011 22:43:52 GMT
Looks magnificent! Ah - would the continuity error be that the Optimus Prime in the framing sequence (which takes place after he regains the ability to transform) should not look like the Action-Master who speaks to Prowl? I never thought of that. Now don't kill me, but because I want the text to look as professional as the artwork, I must point out that there are three instances of IT'S on page 10 that should read ITS because they are possessives and not short for IT IS. (Its molten mouth, its muscled immensity, its tank like structure.) Action-Master Swoop's looking good. Martin Yes that was it exactly Martin. Plus any excuse for a G2 style drawing... That's the errors fixed now! Andy
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Nov 21, 2011 22:44:07 GMT
Some very nice stuff there indeed Andy. Karl Thanks very much Karl. Andy
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Nov 21, 2011 22:44:29 GMT
Great work once again, Andy! cheers G! Andy
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Post by Grand Moff Muffin on May 9, 2012 6:29:31 GMT
As we approach the six-month anniversary of page 10, and we've been discussing ATAP in relation to RG1, I think this thread deserves a bump. Edit: !!! Some of the pages appear to be missing! Martin
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Post by Andy Turnbull on May 9, 2012 19:06:18 GMT
Fixed now Martin!
And yes I will draw more pages of this.
Andy
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Post by Grand Moff Muffin on May 10, 2012 6:02:22 GMT
Fixed now Martin! And yes I will draw more pages of this. Andy Hurray! But I'm sure by "more pages" you meant to say "the rest". Martin
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Post by Andy Turnbull on May 10, 2012 14:17:35 GMT
Yes, but I like to take it in wee chunks. Saves getting overwhelmed by it.
Andy
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Post by Andy Turnbull on May 11, 2012 23:10:01 GMT
Links will be down again, for a wee while. Issues with the main pixel-cel bit, meant wiping it temporarily.
Andy
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Post by Andy Turnbull on May 12, 2012 0:37:21 GMT
Right.
The links are fixed and the site is back up and if anyone is interested in reading the pages on the site I've added one or two wee bits of commentary to it.
Andy
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Post by Andy Turnbull on May 15, 2012 21:23:58 GMT
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Post by Andy Turnbull on May 15, 2012 22:45:44 GMT
Pencils for the first half of the page have just been completed. I now need to redo the layouts slightly on Panel 5, due to Grimlock's energo-sword. It's clamped to his leg.
Andy
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Post by Grand Moff Muffin on May 16, 2012 5:52:34 GMT
How a battle looks when you're in it. Martin
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Post by Andy Turnbull on May 16, 2012 10:46:34 GMT
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Post by Andy Turnbull on May 16, 2012 10:47:50 GMT
I just have the last panel to finish pencils and inks on.
Andy
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Post by Andy Turnbull on May 16, 2012 17:57:05 GMT
Last panel needs to be redrawn. Just doesn't work as is.
Bugger will do that later, as I've had a wee bit of a sore head the now.
Andy
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Post by legios on May 16, 2012 19:11:04 GMT
Interesting to see the process of how things come together. Wets my appetite for the finished page.
Karl
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Post by Andy Turnbull on May 17, 2012 18:04:57 GMT
Ink needs to dry on the last two panels, then I shall erase some stray pencil lines and scan them in.
Andy
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Post by Andy Turnbull on May 17, 2012 22:24:16 GMT
The page doesn't go live until Sunday but seeing as how it is you guys. Andy
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Post by Grand Moff Muffin on May 18, 2012 4:46:09 GMT
Magnificent work, Andy. You are a hero of our time.
Lovely use of our old friend the sound effect. I also like the techno-organic look of the trees.
Two instances of the word "it's" where the apostrophe needs removing, one at the start of panel 4, the other at the start of the second box in panel 5. (There are three correctly spelt instances of "its" in those two panels already, mind.)
I'd be mad too if my skin was on fire.
Martin
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Post by Andy Turnbull on May 18, 2012 10:49:30 GMT
Thanks Martin.
Fixed now.
Andy
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Post by legios on May 18, 2012 19:20:11 GMT
Lovely Andy - great rendition of the monster/beast/creature. He looks a suitable foe to daunt the Dinobots.
Karl
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Oct 10, 2012 22:14:59 GMT
Pencils underway for the next two pages after FAR, FAR TOO LONG.
Andy
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Post by Grand Moff Muffin on Oct 11, 2012 7:04:25 GMT
Pencils underway for the next two pages after FAR, FAR TOO LONG. Andy YES.Martin
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Oct 11, 2012 9:31:57 GMT
And just to prove it's not pie in the sky for those not on Twitter/facebook/google+ Pencils, kind of Current state of play with some inks. Andy
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Post by Rich on Oct 11, 2012 19:12:31 GMT
Nice.
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Post by legios on Oct 11, 2012 19:37:33 GMT
Looks like that is all coming together nicely.
Karl
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Oct 11, 2012 20:06:59 GMT
Cheers guys. Will do more later tonight, once I've finished lettering the fourth and fifth installments of The Daily Straxus.
Andy
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Oct 11, 2012 22:31:41 GMT
Just waiting on ink to dry on one of the panels now. Right that's three of the four panels on Page 12 done.
All going well, I should be able to get it online sometime this weekend.
Andy
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Oct 12, 2012 13:29:02 GMT
Inking finished, it needs to dry before I can scan it in and letter.
Andy
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