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Post by grahamthomson on Nov 24, 2010 9:07:16 GMT
All five Aerialbots, even Slingshot, would hang on Air Raid's every word.
They loved to hear his enthusiastic tales of stratospheric adventure.
With a vertical dive and a barrage of missiles, Air Raid loved to evaporate the tightest of Decepticon air squadrons.
Silverbolt admired his attitude. Fireflight laughed loudly while Skydive quietly learned.
Trailbreaker tipped his head towards Superion and whispered to Mirage. "Looks like Superion's on this mission, too."
"I can't stand it," replied Mirage. "He never talks, never shares. He's just so dull."
Trailbreaker asked Superion: "You don't say much do you?"
"No," said Superion. Not out loud.
"Unshared" written by Graham Thomson, 2010.
A "Drabble"... exactly 100 words.
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Post by legios on Nov 24, 2010 13:13:52 GMT
Nice work Graham. Works well as a little character vignette - and fitting that sort of thing into one hundred words impresses me. (I can only envy you, I don't think I have that sort of brevity in me).
Karl
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Post by grahamthomson on Nov 24, 2010 13:19:44 GMT
Thank, Karl!
The "exactly 100 words" rule is a real challenge, but also a lot of fun!
I think you should have a go at one! Go on, do it!
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Nov 24, 2010 14:29:11 GMT
Another fine little vignette.
Andy
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Post by grahamthomson on Nov 24, 2010 14:30:55 GMT
Cheers!
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Post by Hero on Nov 24, 2010 17:22:36 GMT
One word titles are the way to go. Very early X-Files like . ===KEN
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Post by grahamthomson on Nov 24, 2010 19:56:03 GMT
Heh heh. Or Transformers Armada! I think all those episode titles were one word.
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