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Post by chrisl on Apr 23, 2014 6:32:14 GMT
 Art: Ben Pirrie Everything Else: Me |
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Post by Kingoji on Apr 24, 2014 6:28:31 GMT
I remember Ben drawing this! Very cool stuff.  |
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Post by Hero on Apr 27, 2014 0:45:35 GMT
Desolation RULES.
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Post by chrisl on May 8, 2014 15:52:12 GMT
Eventually I'll sort the other pages out. On related news, I've had offer of a colourist for the comic |
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Post by Andy Turnbull on May 8, 2014 21:53:24 GMT
Always good to see new fancomics and some nice art from Ben and yourself there Chris.
Just a few tips that might make it look a bit more polished, specifically in regards to the lettering. The spaces between the lines in each balloon is too large and there needs to be more of a gap between the edge of the text and the outer line of the balloon.
Andy
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Post by chrisl on May 9, 2014 10:52:39 GMT
Thanks Andy - all the credit for the art must go to Ben as all I did was re-ink it using Manga Studio to make the black bits blacker due to loss of detail caused by shrinking/scanning. Massive thanks for the lettering advise - I originally tried (and failed spectacularly) to replicate your awesome G2 style lettering from part 1, so just had a go at doing something simple just for my own skills development. |
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Post by Andy Turnbull on May 9, 2014 17:20:18 GMT
What program are you lettering in?
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Post by chrisl on May 11, 2014 5:18:59 GMT
Photoshop as I failed spectacularly with illustrator  |
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Post by Andy Turnbull on May 11, 2014 18:38:47 GMT
Persevere with Illustrator. www.balloontales.com/tips/Is a good starting point. Richard Starking has a book about comic book lettering that you can usually get for about 6 to 8 quid. Andy |
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Post by chrisl on May 11, 2014 20:09:04 GMT
I will do once I get some spare time post PhD. I did try using that tutorial but I didn't have the time/patience at the time to make it work |
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