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Post by Andy Turnbull on Nov 16, 2010 17:08:39 GMT
Page three is done. I'll scan and letter it tonight.
Andy
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Nov 16, 2010 19:54:16 GMT
 Page three now up! Andy |
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Post by blueshift on Nov 16, 2010 20:03:01 GMT
That's a great shot of Prowl in the first panel there!
Might be worth playing to the medium's strengths though, and rewriting slightly so there are less captions. Perhaps you could turn a lot of the background exposition into dialogue between Prowl and someone else?
Of course, purists may disagree, there's no right answer with adaptions. Sterling work so far though!
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Nov 16, 2010 20:06:23 GMT
I'm going with the purists and having all the text in there. When it's all done it should be a mighty effort.
Andy
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Post by blueshift on Nov 16, 2010 20:07:29 GMT
Fair enough! How many pages is it likely to be in the end? Have you planned out how to make the T-Rex punching Megatron at the end look good yet?  |
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Nov 16, 2010 22:55:34 GMT
To be honest I could see it being somewhere in the region of sixty to eight pages. We shall see.
I have my idea for the final fight scene, but that may change when I get nearer to actually drawing it.
Andy
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Post by Grand Moff Muffin on Nov 17, 2010 6:28:29 GMT
Super!
Martin
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Nov 17, 2010 12:27:56 GMT
Thanks very much Martin.
Andy
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Post by legios on Nov 17, 2010 12:46:02 GMT
That is very nice indeed Andy. I actually like the style that you are going for here - it is an interesting hybrid style that one doesn't see very much.
Karl
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Post by chrisl on Nov 18, 2010 12:36:33 GMT
Really enjoying this - Keep up the good work Andy! |
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Dec 27, 2010 20:44:45 GMT
Just to let you know this hasn't been abandoned. Page 4 has just been pencilled. Will be inked and scanned in tomorrow.
Andy
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Dec 28, 2010 22:25:08 GMT
 Page Four now done. Andy |
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Post by Kingoji on Dec 28, 2010 23:48:20 GMT
You will, of course, bind it when complete?
And give it to me?
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Dec 29, 2010 0:15:43 GMT
Yes, there will be a print version of this when it is done.
Andy
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Post by Grand Moff Muffin on Dec 29, 2010 8:10:25 GMT
Beautiful, Andy, beautiful.
PS There shouldn't be any apostrophe in "its cursed legacy".
Martin
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Post by blueshift on Dec 29, 2010 9:13:39 GMT
Great stuff! Your art is getting better and better Andy!
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Dec 29, 2010 13:37:35 GMT
Beautiful, Andy, beautiful. PS There shouldn't be any apostrophe in "its cursed legacy". Martin Thanks Martin. Yes there should. I shall fix it after work. Andy |
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Post by Fortmax2020 on Dec 29, 2010 16:58:54 GMT
Great stuff. More please!
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Post by Grand Moff Muffin on Dec 29, 2010 19:06:35 GMT
Beautiful, Andy, beautiful. PS There shouldn't be any apostrophe in "its cursed legacy". Thanks Martin. Yes there should. I shall fix it after work. I'm sure you meant to say "No there shouldn't." Cool that you're giving some more Action-Masters on-screen appearances. Wish I knew enough to be able to name them. Ooh, Sprocket, perhaps? And Jazz? Martin |
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Dec 30, 2010 0:31:23 GMT
Thanks Martin. Yes there should. I shall fix it after work. I'm sure you meant to say "No there shouldn't." Cool that you're giving some more Action-Masters on-screen appearances. Wish I knew enough to be able to name them. Ooh, Sprocket, perhaps? And Jazz? It was Rumbler actually, but as they are the same mold. Well spotted with Jazz as well. Yeah, I wanted to throw in a few other characters at least in the background. Andy Martin |
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Dec 30, 2010 1:24:47 GMT
Oh and clear of the lines so you can see the Wildman panel.  Andy |
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Post by Grand Moff Muffin on Dec 30, 2010 9:06:24 GMT
Panel 5 looks very Christmassy with the captions removed.
Martin
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Post by Rich on Dec 30, 2010 11:14:45 GMT
A really fine piece of work, Andy. As was mentioned above, you're doing a particularly good job on the close-ups of Prowl.
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Dec 30, 2010 14:41:04 GMT
Thanks very much.
Andy
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 8, 2011 22:47:52 GMT
The art for page 5 has been done and I am just over halfway through drawing page 6.
Andy
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 9, 2011 21:35:16 GMT
 I shall letter page 6 tomorrow night after work. Andy |
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Post by Kingoji on Jan 9, 2011 22:07:16 GMT
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 9, 2011 22:33:19 GMT
Oh alright then, I will letter it tonight!
Andy
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Post by grahamthomson on Jan 9, 2011 22:37:58 GMT
Awesome!
Out of interest, how many paragraphs in are you of the original prose?
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Post by Andy Turnbull on Jan 9, 2011 22:44:12 GMT
Page 5 takes me 14 paragraphs in.
Page 6 is another 8 paragraphs.
Andy
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